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"I hate you guys right now." I growled at the men who had 'kidnapped' me and were dragging me to a club. They all just laughed.
"Come on Frau(1), you can't hate the awesome me." Prussia laughed. I rolled my eyes, uggh I glared at all three of them. It just amazed me how I stayed friends with all of them after I had dated all of them. I dated France first, he cheated on me with in the first few months. Then I dated Prussia, he cheated on me after a few months as well. Then Spain, our relationship lasted the longest... One year and assorted months. Broke up for the same reason. I was pissed at them, I was going to get my revenge on them for this. Especially since I was sandwiched between France and Prussia. I have no idea why one of them couldn't sit up in the front with Spain.
"We are here." France said staring out the tinted window. The Neon lights were visible from the inside of the car. The door opened and France fell out, because of the fact we had been packed in there like sardines. I fell were France had been sitting and Prussia fell on top of me.
"Vell, I see you still can't keep away me." He wagged his eyebrows. I pushed him off and slapped him. "Oww." I heard him complain from behind me as I jumped out of the car. I quickly fixed my clothes and cleared my throat. I saw Spain and France's face as they looked at Prussia behind me. I turned and saw what they were staring at, a bright red hand mark on his face. It seemed even brighter because of his extremely light skin.
"I'm not going to ask what Gilbert did to deserve that, so let's just go inside." Spain gestured for me to go first. "Chicas adelante (2)." He smiled. I huffed and strode past him. I couldn't hear them but I knew that they were close behind me. I stood in line, when someone tapped my back.
"No need for vaiting in line when you vith the Awesome Prussia." He walked over to the security and talked with him for a minute. I sighed and turned to face France and Spain.
"There is no need to be so upset Chica. We want you to have fun and smile." He grinned.
"He's right mon cheri (3), smile. You look so beautiful when you do."
"Si(4)." Spain agreed. I blushed, my lips curved upward in a tiny smile. "There, you look perfect."
"Tout simplement magnifique.(5)"
"Hey guys." I heard Prussia call to us. I turned and saw him beckoning us over with his hand. We walked into the club and remembered why I had been so upset with them for bringing me here. I hated clubs, Uggh. I looked around and saw things I could lived my whole life without seeing.
"Come on _______, let's go dance." France grabbed my hand and tugged me out to the dance floor. I went from being in a open and comfortable space to being in crammed and stuffy space. France held me close to him.
"Please Francis, promise me no dirty dancing at all." I pulled him down to my level so he could hear me over the booming bass of the music. "No dirty comments or dirty anything, s'il vous plaît.(6)" I begged him.
"Don't worry mon cheri(3), I promise. Sur mon honneur.(7)" He assured me, but pulled me closer to him as we danced. I blushed and chuckled to myself.
After a few songs I finally convinced France to go sit down. Spain and Prussia were not where in sight, so we sat down at a table. I was about to sit down when France decided to pull me into his lap.
"You know I miss you, I wish that you were still mine." My breath hitched as he murmured this in my ear.
"Francis, please I'd rather not talk about this." I responded.
"But I want you to know how sorry I am. Je suis tellement désolé, vous ne savez pas combien je regrette ce que j'ai fait.(8)" His tone was repentant, no hint of anything else really. It was a real and truly heartfelt apology.
"I-I don't what to say Francis." I studdered. He stood us both up and spun me around so he could look me in the eyes.
"Say you still love me as much as I love you and take me back." He begged as he looked down into my eyes. Then he kissed me, I actually kissed back. 'NO!" My mind screamed. I pushed him away. He looked at me, his eyes soft and heart broken.
"Francis, I-I"
"Hey guys. Having any fun _______?" Prussia yelled behind me. I felt his arm rest on one of my shoulders.
"I g-guess." I said still watching France.
"Hey vhy don't we go get some drinks??" Prussia grabbed me by the arm and pulled me toward the bar. "Two beers." Prussia told the man.
"Gilbert, I'm not in the mood to drink anything right now." I looked at the floor.
"Nonsense." He slammed the beer on the counter in front of me. I jumped. "Sorry." He chuckled, I looked at him my eyebrows pulling together. It was a nervous chuckle.
"Gilbert?? Is there something the matter?" I noted his expression, it became uneasy and anxious.
"I umm I wanted uhh-"
"Just say it Gilbert!"
"I'm sorry." I looked at him stunned. "I'm sorry that I che-" Oh God No!
"Gilbert, don't. I don't want to talk about thi-" He kissed me. I pushed him away when I felt the same reaction coming on. No not him too! "Gilbert."
"Vait, I need you to hear me out." He put his hand on my shoulders so I wouldn't leave. "You have no idea how much I regret vhat I did. I vas a complete idiot, an awesome one, but an idiot nevertheless ."
"Please Gilbert, I-I can't do this right now." I shook of his hands off my shoulders and left. I bit my lip, holding back the tears. Two ex's asking to get back together in one night, it was almost too much. Especially since I was still friends with both of them. I went and sat down at an empty table. I started to play with a straw that I found on the table.
"Hola Chica." I looked up and saw Spain.
"Hey Antonio." I forced a smile on my face.
"You aren't having any fun are you?" He frowned.
"Well I was until both Francis and Gilbert- never mind. It will just put me in a worse mood. Take me out to dance, Please." Antonio seemed surprised but grinned and held out his hand. I gratefully took it. He walked me out to the dance floor and I pulled him close. I had to get my mind of what had just happened with Prussia and France. I looked up at Spain, who was clearly enjoying this. He looked down at me at the same time and kissed me. I couldn't help but return it. Then just like with the other two, I had to pull away.
"Lo siento.(9)" He whispered in my ear. "I just had too. I need you and your love."
"I need to go." I whispered back to him. I pushed my way through the crowd and went straight for the ladies room. I looked around and didn't see anyone in there. I took a deep breath and put both hands on the sides of the sink in front of me. I closed my eyes and tried to clear my mind. I thought long and hard and realized that still had enough feelings for one of them to try again. I lifted my head and opened my eyes, looking at myself in the mirror. I saw the fear in my eyes, but there was enough love for him to give him another chance. I took one last cleansing breath and stood up. I strode out with my head up high ready to face him.


(1)woman, German
(2)ladies first, spanish
(3)my dear, french
(4)yes, spanish
(5)just beautiful, french
(6)please, french
(7)On my honor, french
(8)I'm so sorry, you do not know how much I regret what I did, french
(9) I'm sorry, spanish

[Okay so there are three different ending for this story. Here they are, In chronological order from when they dated you.]


First Ending:

I saw him standing alone in the corner. I was shocked, he was usually surrounded by women. As I got up closer to him, He lifted his head and I saw his sea blue eyes.
"Mon ami-" I cut him off with a passionate kiss. He stiffed with surprised but kissed back.
"Francis." I whispered. "I still love you and I want to give us another try." He held me close to him and kissed me again.
"Vous venez de me faire homme le plus heureux du monde. (1)" He sighed and began to run a hand through my hair. I smiled and laid my head on his chest. "I promise to never hurt you like that ever again." He whispered into my hair.

(1)You just made me the happiest man in the world


Second Ending:

I went back to the bar and got a beer. I walked around the club for at least five minutes, before I found him sitting down at a table. He watched as Gilbird ran around the table, happily chirping to the loud dance music.
"Hey." I gave him a little smile, he looked up at me. His burgundy eyes not their usually bright fiery selves.
"Hey." He answered and face planted into the table. I sat down and Gilbird turned to face me and began to chirp angrily at me.
"I'm sorry Gilbird but I can't share this beer with you. It's for Gilbert." I teased him, Gilbert looked up at me. I held out the beer and he took it without hesitation. "Gilbert." I whispered his name, the fear was about to overcome my desire to give him a second chance. He looked at me. "Ich liebe dich.(1)" I whispered in really weird accented German. His expression was confused and happy. "I really want there to be an us again." He sprang up from his chair and pulled me into his arms, kissing me. I chuckled and wrapped my arms around his neck. I laid my head on his chest.
"I knew you couldn't resist the Awesome Prussia!!" He laughed in his usual loud but cute laugh.
"No I couldn't resisted the Awesome Gilbird." I teased him and he groaned. I laughed and so did he. A hand was suddenly under my chin, making my look up at Prussia, surprisingly gentle and repentant face.
"I swear I vill never hurt you like that again, I vill never make that stupid mistake again." Then he kissed me once more before he took me out to dance.

(1)I love you



Third Ending:

I walked right out of the bathroom and crashed right into someone.
"I'm really sor..." I trailed off as I gazed into his dazzling green eyes. He chuckled.
"Don't worry about it Chica." His voice sounded like music to my ears, I had been with him the longest and in turn fell for him the hardest. I had never expected him to cheat on me and I was in shock when he did.
"Antonio?"
"Si?(1)"
"Can we take a walk outside? If that's alright with you of course." I blushed.
"Si(1), of course." We left the club and just walked around.
"I need to ask you something." I said to him after a few minutes.
"Ask away mi reina.(2)" I took a deep breath then asked before I chickened out.
"Why did you cheat on me?" He halted right there. I regretted the question just like I knew I would. "I'm sorry I just needed to know. You don't have to answer if you don't want to. I me-" He pressed his fingers to my lips silencing me.
"You never let me explain what happen. I never cheated on you, I could never have cheated on you. Not in a million years." He smiled a tender and loving smile. "I love you to much to ever hurt you like that. It was a crazy fangirl who took that picture, she forced herself on me. I tried to push her away but That girl was surprisingly strong." He looked at me his expression shocked as he remembered that day.
"Yeah, Fangirls can get pretty crazy." I chuckled. Then I looked at him with repentant eyes. "Antonio, I'm really sorry I didn't believe you. It's just-" He cut me off again, but this time with his lips. I wrapped my arms around his neck, his were around my waist.
"I forgive you." He grinned. "I love you, ________."
"I love you too, Antonio." I grinned back, happy to know the truth and have Antonio again.

(1)yes
(2)my queen
Sorry if it's annoying that all my stories are song-fics. Well anyway here's my first story with the BTT x Reader, Hope I did a good job.

As always :D Hetalia belongs to :iconhimaruyaplz:

Song belongs to Cascada, here's the song www.youtube.com/watch?v=KVNKtk… (Am I the only one who thinks she sounds like Miley Cyrus?? Sorry If I offended anyone by saying that, It's just she really does...at least to me.)

Story belongs to :iconbokumexico-vee:

You belong to... one of these three :iconbadtouchtrioplz:


Any suggestions or comments. Also if anyone has an info on 2p! characters and would like to share it with me. That would be awesome, I really want to start writing more fan-fics on them, but I only really know about 2p! Italy. Please please please if you could give me some info, I will be very grateful :please: Thank you for reading! You guys are awesome :D

EDIT: Thank you for the info on the 2p!s, no more is needed at the moment. Thanks :)
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Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
They kissed me after we broke up .....where is a chainsaw when you need one ...
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Anime-girl-dreams Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my gosh! I love this story!

Awww! It is truly adorable! (: 
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Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014
i'm sitting here reading this going " You used proper Spanish....I LOVE YOU!!!" 
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BokuMexico-Vee Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes!! :D I've been trying to improve my written Spanish and have been including it where I can. Spanish is one of my primary languages and I speak it at home...but my written Spanish... needs a little work.
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Floridadaawesome Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014
ahahaha i'm taking classes so I sorta  know what i'm doing 
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fanfiolee Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
is not "chicas adelante" is " las damas primero" 

the people in spainddon't say "chica", "chica" is more used in centroamerica 
spain:hola, ¡como esta?
cuba:¿hola chica como has estado?
(It is a common mistake )
pd:Now you know a little more Spanish ^,^
pd2: im from chile
pd3: i like the one-shot
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imakefanfictions Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2014  Student Photographer
WHATTTTTTTTTTT?????!!!!! my whole life has been a lie WHAT? 
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fanfiolee Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014
Really? xD the word "chica" is just used when you speak of someone else example:"esa chica es linda" or "las chicas estan jugando voleyball"
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imakefanfictions Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Photographer
Y yo estube usando google traductor para tradusco el espanol toda mi life
(SUCCES)
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BokuMexico-Vee Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I apologize for that :iconfacepalmplz:...I really should have known better. My mom tells me all the time that they speak so much more correctly there. Soy Mexicana. 

Thank you for pointing it out, I've been meaning to look over some of my older fanfics and fixing them up. And Thank you! I'm glad you like the story :D
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